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    August 26

    * Last Heartbeat *

     
     
    On the west side of the city
    in a rundown two room flat
    sittin' by her window
    with a baby in her lap
     
    She stares out of the window
    at this city that she hates
    and wonders what she ever did
    to deserve this fate.
     
    But the man who said he loved her,
    well you know, he's been long gone
    and she aint seen nor heard from him
    since before this child was born.
     
    //////
     
    Deep within her mind she knows
    she has no place for him
    but deep within her heart she wonders
    if she'll ever love again
     
    But the autumn rain is fallin'
    and tomorrow will bring snow
    and those pretty leaves lie rustin'
    in the gutter of her soul.
     
    //////
     
    There's no money left to buy the heat
    no food upon the shelf
    and she watches as the child sleeps
    and cries to herself
     
    " Oh child, oh child, oh child of mine
    do not fear this thing
    for tonight will bring a stranger's voice
    and another nightmare dream"
     
    "Oh child, oh child, oh child I pray
    do not be my judge
    for this thing that I must do tonight
    I do for you, my love"
     
    /////
     
    On the west side of the city
    in a rundown two room flat
    starin' out the window
    as the daylight turns to black
     
    And she watches as the cars below
    start circle'n'' the street
    like the vultures that are circlin'
    waitin' for that last heartbeat!
     
    /////
     
    "Oh child, oh child, oh child I pray
    do not be my judge
    for this thing that I must do tonight
    I do for you, my love"

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    iamstephzen wrote:
    Finally...the link worked for me. You are a good guitar player! I like the lyrics. For me the melody doesn't work with the lyrics. I know you are going to want a better explanation, but I am not sure I can give it.
    Sept. 12
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    Deirdre_Writes wrote:
    I still haven't been able to hear the song. It doesn't even look like the computer is loading anything when I click on this blog entry. I'll keep trying!
    Sept. 5
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    Song-fairy wrote:
    I can't get the link working. I recommend you upload to ripway or walagata. I've never had any luck with Upload hut myself. I'll wait for your reply. ^S^
    Sept. 5
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    Song-fairy wrote:
    These are fabulous lyrics I would love to hear you sing it. ^S^
    Aug. 28
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    Jorge wrote:
    What a sad, clear vision, out that tenement window!
    J.
    Aug. 27
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    Deirdre_Writes wrote:
    Lyrics? You've captured a poingent slice of life here.
    Aug. 27

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